Puppy's Kiss, a Haiku

[SissyPuppers]

Tails wag, eyes so bright,

Mistress's pure will obeyed,

Love's unquestioned leash.

[Ta****]

6, 7, 5 ≠ 5, 7, 5; but awesome nevertheless.

[SissyPuppers]

41 minutes ago, TasteTheseKisses said:

6, 7, 5 ≠ 5, 7, 5; but awesome nevertheless.

şïşşy was frightened by Taste's correction but has looked up a Japanese Haiku's order and it does seem to be 5, 7, 5.. Perhaps Taste is thinking of a different structure? şïşşy spend 3 ½

[SissyPuppers]

hours working on it.. ♥️

[SissyPuppers]

1 minute ago, SissyPuppers said:

şïşşy was frightened by Taste's correction but has looked up a Japanese Haiku's order and it does seem to be 5, 7, 5.. Perhaps Taste is thinking of a different structure? şïşşy spend 3 ½

Thank You Sir, for the Special attention!! ♥️

[Ta****]

Ta¹ ils² wag³, eyes⁴ so⁵ bright⁶

[Ta****]

That is 6 syllables

[SissyPuppers]

Well.... Tails, with ALL due respect to Sir, (and this makes it so very hard to resist Him), has a single syllable as it does not have a secondary set of vowels separated by one or more consonants.

[SissyPuppers]

Or Sir can Google it Himself.. With the UTMOST respect... şïşşy is trembling at this.... 🤢

[Ta****]

Ah, but a syllable can have a consonant after the vowel.
Technically, yes you could say it is one syllable just like the word 'tell', but however, tell has two L's at the end and only one vowel.
However, there are two factors to consider on top of this:
1. People say it tay-ul and in way that such the 'L' itself is its own consonant. And a lot of the words that have been picked up in English are of a spoken etymology in origins thus written as such. Because a dog's 'tail' rhymes with a fairy 'tale'. And this becomes to the second...
2. English is an amalgam of many predecessors, Germanic , Gaelic, Latin (even bits of Arabic for number system), The rules of one word don't necessarily add up to all instances. In fact, many of the rules are thrown out entirely. Look at the words "Pacific Ocean" every 'c' in those words are pronounced a different way. There are whole convoluted mess of reasons why. But nevertheless, every c is different. And in Eastern type languages such as Chinese and Japanese, the 'L' sound is non-existent, because it is a specifically unique sound that involves using the tongue against the Upper incisors, which doesn't exist and it will say Japanese. Thus the word for baseball is baseburu.
This leads to my hidden third point . . .
3. This anecdotal evidence so not exactly scholarly but art is always anecdotal. I am a Lyricist and songwriter. You know who else is? Shakespeare. And even his iambic pentameter, 'Tale' is counted as 2 syllables.
See technicalities don't matter at all in art. Joy, quoting some specific rule of an amalgam of languages is inconsequential to the fact that a dog's tail wags with two syllables.

In the end doesn't even matter.

[SissyPuppers]

I accept Your thoughts... Local accents, if they were pertain, and in consideration that one could not play to the "whole audience" would assumptively lie with the author's locality and born and lived vernacular. California does not express tail as a 2 syllable word. Furthermore she is unable to find a dictionary or syllables or rhyming poetry website or forum that assigns 2 syllables to the word. (tail)

Perhaps if Sir could support his proposition or thesis sighting his claims it could be given more weight. Perhaps others will chime in on this definitely interesting and literarily stimulating debate... ♥️

[SissyPuppers]

Might I dare to contest that using unlimited interpretations for a word in the creation of a song, and please, I say this with respect as to your station vs mine but also to how I have been trained as a toy to my Owner... It COULD be seen as lazy (?) or taking the easy way out if every word is up for modification utilizing some literary history from some point in time.. I offer it again, please I humbly beg and pray for understanding, that this be taken in the light and weight for which it is meant.. A pleasant and meandering consideration in the pursuit of art and analysis of the spoken language thru the ages and it's etymology.

I am grateful, Sir, for Your input and mental stimulus... It is exciting and an adventure of sorts to tumble with one so far up the rightful rung as You are to I

[SissyPuppers]

Is sales or sails also 2?

[SissyPuppers]

If fail is 2 then is failure 4? Fay¹ yul² ee³ ur⁴

[Ta****]

12 minutes ago, SissyPuppers said:

I accept Your thoughts... Local accents, if they were pertain, and in consideration that one could not play to the "whole audience" would assumptively lie with the author's locality and born and lived vernacular. California does not express tail as a 2 syllable word. Furthermore she is unable to find a dictionary or syllables or rhyming poetry website or forum that assigns 2 syllables to the word. (tail)

Perhaps if Sir could support his proposition or thesis sighting his claims it could be given more weight. Perhaps others will chime in on this definitely interesting and literarily stimulating debate... ♥️

Im sorry, but i will not accept your word when speaking for the State of California when it has one of the largest populations in America and a multitude of different cultures ranging from Latino to Japanese. Especially considering that the governor of California at one point pronounced the last syllable as two.

[Ta****]

15 minutes ago, SissyPuppers said:

I accept Your thoughts... Local accents, if they were pertain, and in consideration that one could not play to the "whole audience" would assumptively lie with the author's locality and born and lived vernacular. California does not express tail as a 2 syllable word. Furthermore she is unable to find a dictionary or syllables or rhyming poetry website or forum that assigns 2 syllables to the word. (tail)

Perhaps if Sir could support his proposition or thesis sighting his claims it could be given more weight. Perhaps others will chime in on this definitely interesting and literarily stimulating debate... ♥️

And to address the second part of the statement. I understand that you feel yourself as a lower echelon to I but it is your mistress that is a higher echelon than both of us. So I as I am not her sub and I'm not a sub to anyone. I still consider you an equal and this is quite fun mentally jousting about modern vernacular and the artistic creative capabilities of one to just not give a single ounce of my own defecation

[Ta****]

12 minutes ago, SissyPuppers said:

Might I dare to contest that using unlimited interpretations for a word in the creation of a song, and please, I say this with respect as to your station vs mine but also to how I have been trained as a toy to my Owner... It COULD be seen as lazy (?) or taking the easy way out if every word is up for modification utilizing some literary history from some point in time.. I offer it again, please I humbly beg and pray for understanding, that this be taken in the light and weight for which it is meant.. A pleasant and meandering consideration in the pursuit of art and analysis of the spoken language thru the ages and it's etymology.

I am grateful, Sir, for Your input and mental stimulus... It is exciting and an adventure of sorts to tumble with one so far up the rightful rung as You are to I

Well then there it is. This is all based on culture here. Your mistress sees the written word as infallible and unmovable as to think that one cannot play with the sounds that each word makes to create something that makes sense and fits where it should. Which is a great way to look at language sometimes. However, I think historically languages meant to change and turn and twist and wrap around the culture that assimilates it. And in accepting one way of saying anything is a picture of a moment in time.

[Ta****]

14 minutes ago, SissyPuppers said:

Is sales or sails also 2?

Well if you go with AWOL Nation, sail is one syllable. However, if you look at a number of different artistic interpretations of anything with the l at the end of it, you can see that the l becomes its own syllable but that of course is once again artistic interpretation.
Oh and it'd be three syllables, Fay¹ ul² yur³.

[SissyPuppers]

California was merely dragged in as şïşşy's litter was born there. So her upbringing, if one can call it even remotely that, is within the context of the amalgam of her experiences thru life. As it goes, one cannot know what one does not know. To task me with knowledge of the depth and breadth of the world's linguistic effects on all our language and not to mention the culture, dynamic as it is, yet pertinent to one's period on this celestial plane... One would be heavy handed as to NOT allow this grunting runt to be allowed to board that flight, to be summarily called off the roster in her free wheeling attempt to offer folly of thought to the every whisping aural clouds of historical prose... Here today, gone tomorrow, that's me... Roger Waters, Pink Floyd.

[SissyPuppers]

*sissy sits up, sniffing the air feverishly for the one in fur... ♥️

[SissyPuppers]

And with regards to Mayor for a Minute Newsome... He barely has thoughts in his head period, unless what to order as an apéritif to whet is appetite for his meal at The French Laundry... Nero fiddled while Rome burned. Gosh, rather apropos considering cindery Lost Angels. şïşşy lives and loves in Northern California, far enough from fecal fountains on every street corner but close enough to attend The Citadel and The Power Exchange to give gravity to depravity, before 50 gyrating gents.

[SissyPuppers]

If Sir will friend şïşşy puppy she wanted to share two poems laid out... şïşşy enjoys digital art rendering as well.

[Ta****]

1 hour ago, SissyPuppers said:

California was merely dragged in as şïşşy's litter was born there. So her upbringing, if one can call it even remotely that, is within the context of the amalgam of her experiences thru life. As it goes, one cannot know what one does not know. To task me with knowledge of the depth and breadth of the world's linguistic effects on all our language and not to mention the culture, dynamic as it is, yet pertinent to one's period on this celestial plane... One would be heavy handed as to NOT allow this grunting runt to be allowed to board that flight, to be summarily called off the roster in her free wheeling attempt to offer folly of thought to the every whisping aural clouds of historical prose... Here today, gone tomorrow, that's me... Roger Waters, Pink Floyd.

Or Sid Barret, and which one of my favorite songs of all time was written for him after he checked out, after he was "gone tomorrow".
Speaking of gone tomorrow, what happened to all of our conversation??

[Ta****]

1 hour ago, SissyPuppers said:

And with regards to Mayor for a Minute Newsome... He barely has thoughts in his head period, unless what to order as an apéritif to whet is appetite for his meal at The French Laundry... Nero fiddled while Rome burned. Gosh, rather apropos considering cindery Lost Angels. şïşşy lives and loves in Northern California, far enough from fecal fountains on every street corner but close enough to attend The Citadel and The Power Exchange to give gravity to depravity, before 50 gyrating gents.

I wasn't talking about Newsome, I was talking about the one and only Governator

[Ta****]

20 minutes ago, SissyPuppers said:

If Sir will friend şïşşy puppy she wanted to share two poems laid out... şïşşy enjoys digital art rendering as well.

Done