Sweet Sexy Taste

[Li****]

Car park kisses in the back seat of a car in moments of affection and passion….

Breathing intensifies…..car windows steaming up…

She unbuttoned all the buttons of her dress and touches herself whist she makes you watch…

She slowly slides two fingers deep inside her and she continues to look at me…..

She takes her fingers to her mouth and I grab her hand and slide her fingers into my mouth……


I can taste her sweet divine need….so sweet….
so sexy

So proud to call you mine!!

[GB****]

It’s good. But may I make one suggestion? You switch perspective a few times from first person (the reader) to third person (you). So during the read I’m not sure if I’m supposed to read it as it’s happening to me, or if it’s happening to you. It’s just a minor critique but overall a good, quick read!

[Angel1669]

Ok