ChromeStarz - sorry it's taken so long to reply, my family had some issues and I stepped away for a bit. What I'm looking for is - when I write a scene with ... mainly dominant/submission, some bondage ... I'm hoping to get some advice as to "No - that's complete crap" to "Yes, that's completely Read more… believable" and anything in between. Basically, that last bit - I write what I think BDSM is ... and someone reads it and says "Yeah, I think that could work". I have no problems taking criticism - including "Nope, not believable at all" as long as the criticism is meant to improve, not demean.