Divine Servitude

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Divine Servitude

Push, pull, clench and release
She’s such a goddamn tease
Laying there naked on the bed
Slowly crawling do you tread
Appearing for her on all fours
A feeling runs down to your core
A feeling of want and desire
Something to feed the endless fire
She commands in all who see
Her for who she wants to be


She is beauty, grace, and lust
Becoming something that you must
Touch, kiss, lick, caress and taste
You can hear your own heart race
The thought of her sweet elixir
And everything that is her
Running down your eager face
Cements you knowing your place
Right there at her divine feet
Never thinking you could meet
Such a beautiful ‘n divine Goddess

Her legs scissor and writhe
There is heat in her wild eyes
Her desire is as plain as day
Her pleasure is the only way
You will see your own release
Yet it is only a single piece
As to why you blindly serve
And give her all she deserves

Yet if someone were to ask
Why you complete every task
Without a complaint or sound
For that you have already found
The place where you now belong
The place you craved all along
Was to be at her divine heel
You can’t deny how you feel
To fulfill her every request
To complete all she behests
For she is your Goddess

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I like this. Perhaps after line 14 (typical sonnet length) set stanza apart and go from AABBCC rhyme to ABABCDCD by transposing the line positions... Would add variance and increase novelty and interest for the reader. Also this helps gave a five to each stanzas 7th or so line where a Volta may be used as dramatic intent is emphasized at that point in the flow