To much?

[Co****]

So... I wrote this little poem today. Is it to much?

"Let's write a story,
About me and you.
Let's write a story,
Just us two.

One where your mine,
One where I'm yours,

Let's write a story,
Behind closed doors.

A tale full of fire,
Of passions and grace,
Of whispered confessions
In our secret space.

So pick up your phone,
Let’s see it through
This beautiful story
Of a just me and a just you?"

Thoughts and opinions?

[Deleted Member]

I love it!!!

[Deleted Member]

🖤💚🖤 I love it!!

[Tr****]

Ain't it quaint, we're just looking for a little taint, don't have to cover it in p*int, just be true to you, and do what you do...

[De****]

I love it 🥰

[An****]

It's a nice poem. It's cute.

[Deleted Member]

That's beautiful!! Ughh I miss writing poems. I used to when I was younger and ig since I'm older I've had writers block.