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Naughty Haiku Challenge?


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Anyone up for a bit of poetry? I challenge you to write a naughty haiku! Easiest poem ever: three lines of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.

Here's mine:

A sharp crack precedes

a red palm print. I yelp, and

then present for more.

The bruises I leave
***t the prettiest pictures
on your tender flesh.

(edited)

Open up your mind.

Together we move, we see

Darkness, ours to take.

 

Edited by Deleted Member

Stood there by the bed

Thoughts flash inside of her head

Not one word was said

revised version:

Stood there by the bed

Thoughts that flash inside her head

Not one word was said

Dominant controlled
Eyes that beg the forgiveness
Of a lust wholly sated.

A rabbit hopping 

In shaking trembling hole 

Emerges dripping wet

 

 

 

 

 

  • 2 weeks later...
cautiousswitch

I can hardly move
Tight ropes press into my skin
Typical Friday

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