I write more poems!...

[Briansy]

Well... Idk where else to put my poem and I be subby so until someone points me there I have more... And more... I like to write ok🥺

With our working timed
We all spent the day just breathing
In our thinking mind
We all spent the moments dreaming

With our horror near
All the good people go from ***
When ***s are here
We all spend the time crying there

All good hopes lose their scope
your saved but they cut your rope
And there goes yu dwindling hope
Now you walk alone stuck on mope

Where was that face so fine
held your hand and said that "you are mine"
Yet when hardness strikes
You see you are impaled in spikes

Still thinking free
You only hope the words come save me
No one checks the hurt
You must be the one that you weren't

Now go walk and be a goodman
Knowing all in life you have in plan

[ThumperG]

On 12/7/2022 at 5:49 AM, Briansy said:

Well... Idk where else to put my poem and I be subby so until someone points me there I have more... And more... I like to write ok🥺

With our working timed
We all spent the day just breathing
In our thinking mind
We all spent the moments dreaming

With our horror near
All the good people go from ***
When ***s are here
We all spend the time crying there

All good hopes lose their scope
your saved but they cut your rope
And there goes yu dwindling hope
Now you walk alone stuck on mope

Where was that face so fine
held your hand and said that "you are mine"
Yet when hardness strikes
You see you are impaled in spikes

Still thinking free
You only hope the words come save me
No one checks the hurt
You must be the one that you weren't

Now go walk and be a goodman
Knowing all in life you have in plan

Wow! This I believe is one of the better ones, you really are VERY   talented. I haven't written poetry in so long but reading yours does make me happy so take that as a compliment. Keep them coming! 😉