Daddy's got you - Part 1 (Trying to learn to write stories)

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The first time you knelt for me, it wasn’t in submission—it was in surrender. Your lips parted before I even gave the order, eyes locked on mine like I held the air in your lungs. "Good girl," I murmured, tangling my fingers in your hair. "Look at you, already so perfect for me."

I didn’t need to *** you. You wanted to please. When I guided your mouth onto my cock, you took me deep, throat fluttering around me, tears glistening but never falling. "Fuck, princess—that’s it," I groaned, thumbing away a drop of spit from your chin. "You were made for this, weren’t you? To take every inch like a good little thing."

You moaned around me, and I felt it—the vibration, the *** grind of your thighs. I let you chase your own pleasure for once, fingers trailing down to rub slow circles over your clit while you sucked me off. "Go on," I whispered. "Let Daddy feel you fall apart."

You came with a whimper, trembling but never pulling away, and god—that loyalty undid me. I spilled down your throat, watching you swallow every drop like it was your purpose. "My perfect girl," I sighed, lifting you onto my lap to kiss you dizzy. "All mine."

By the third night, you didn’t even need my hands to obey.

I woke to your hips rocking against my thigh, your breath ragged in the dark. "Thought you could sneak your pleasure, hmm?" I flipped you onto your back, pinning your wrists, biting a trail down your neck. You gasped, but I just chuckled, palming between your legs. "Soaking my sheets, princess. Pathetic."

The word made you clench. I knew it would.

I teased you for hours—two fingers thrusting deep, my mouth on your tits, your clit, everywhere but where you needed most. "You’ll cum when I say," I growled, nipping your inner thigh. "And you’ll thank me for making you wait."

You sobbed when I finally let you climax, your back arching off the bed as I fucked you through it, my name a prayer on your lips. "That’s it," I panted, dragging you closer. "Daddy’s got you."

By morning, you were addicted—to my touch, my praise, the way I ruined you so sweetly.

I pressed you into the mattress, my cock sliding between your thighs, your slick coating me. "Beg," I demanded, gripping your hair. "Tell me who you belong to."

"You," you whined, writhing. "Only you, Daddy—please—!"

I sheathed myself inside you in one brutal thrust, stealing your breath. "Mine." Every snap of my hips etched the claim deeper. "Every sound, every shudder—all for me." You came with a scream, nails raking my back, but I didn’t stop. Couldn’t stop.

I pulled out last second, spilling onto your stomach, marking you. "Beautiful," I breathed, swiping my fingers through the mess and pressing them to your lips. "Clean it up, princess. Show me how good you can be."

You obeyed, tongue curling around my fingers, eyes glazed with devotion.

And I smiled.

We were just getting started.... x

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Oh wow.. this was great! Wouldn’t believe you’re only just learning to write stories

[Se****]

I love this. Thank you for sharing x

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5 hours ago, deelicious111 said:

Oh wow.. this was great! Wouldn’t believe you’re only just learning to write stories

Thank you for your kind words! But yes, my first real attempt. I've done a bit of online fun in terms of naughty chats before but decided to try this. Part 2 will follow soon.....

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38 minutes ago, SerendipitousKeeper said:

I love this. Thank you for sharing x

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, part 2 will follow soon x

[Pr****]

I loved this! Such an amazing scene

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1 minute ago, PrincessMyra said:

I loved this! Such an amazing scene

Thank you! Part 2 to follow soon.

[Bk****]

Very powerful words my friend…

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Just now, Bkinky4u said:

Very powerful words my friend…

Thank you. I'm still learning how to put them together.

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On 7/2/2025 at 9:40 AM, QuantumProtector said:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, part 2 will follow soon x

I’m looking forward to reading it, soon I hope

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Part 2 has been uploaded and is now waiting for approval!

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10 minutes ago, QuantumProtector said:

Part 2 has been uploaded and is now waiting for approval!

Let’s hope it’s as good as part one 😜