What happens when you start writing with no plan?

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Hmmm, what face shall I wear today?

 

Harley says, fuck them all,

Both literally and metaphorically of course

She wanted to delight in the carnage

And flee from the mad house 

 

Sylvia said much the same 

But she wanted to make more of a tragedy of it

And then spend hours in introspection

Loathing herself

 

Maya didn’t say anything at all

She just stared out of the window 

Watching the voices fly from bird beaks

Wondering if she had ever heard her own sound 

 

Messed wondered about saying all the thoughts in her head

But knew that would just make a ***y mess

And she didn’t much feel like cleaning faeces 

Not today anyway 

 

The good girl said just smile and be patient 

Devour the scraps ***tered at your feet

For they are tasty little morsels

And will nourish the soul 

 

Alice cried, it’s just too late!

She flooded her house

And prayed the white rabbit knew how to swim

He didn’t 

 

The blade goaded, any face but this one 

And sliced a horror show at my reflection 

The *** of my sub-conscious deliberation

Suddenly seemed unimportant 

 

I decided to stay inside 

 

 

 

Edited February 27, 2021 by Deleted Member

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Thank you Messedup79 I understand I’m going through similar thoughts. Your last paragraph hits many nerve endings. Stay strong and fight it and if you need to talk I’m here Tarrot 💪

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3 hours ago, TAROTT said:

Thank you Messedup79 I understand I’m going through similar thoughts. Your last paragraph hits many nerve endings. Stay strong and fight it and if you need to talk I’m here Tarrot 💪

Thanks. I found bringing March forward and having wine and chocolate helped ... dont tell anyone. But March 1st was a school night ffs... sorry. ... it’s the wine... potty mouth. I hope you’re feeling better. I recommend vices. 😏

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Good to hear it ! Enjoy 😉 

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This is worrying, part story part journal. Even Freud had his demons to fight

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1 hour ago, FabSeverus said:

This is worrying, part story part journal. Even Freud had his demons to fight

Hmmmm...interesting perspective. It could just be ‘art’ whatever that is 🤷🏻‍♀️

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The best artists have to suffer. Our makers are sadists who enjoy watching our turmoil! Sadly Freud’s son was a ***ter and did a hideous picture of the Queen ( my opinion only) 

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Messedup79, I am sorry you’ve gone. I hope you are ok and If you sign up again, I would love to continue talking x

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I’ve just discovered that you have deleted your membership. I wished you could have stayed and talked with you more Messedup79  . I too am here if you come back 🖤

[Strengan]

You can always decide to come outside. If you do see you there.