Story I just threw down for fun. Tell me what you think

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Happy Birthday story for Mommy:

As I kneel on the floor before Mommy. She takes a slight glance toward the bathroom. I perk up, "Mommy, would you like me to draw you a bath? Since you just arrived home from work." Mommy gets a lil grin and replies "yes baby boy." With a slight alluring tone. Make sure it is the right hot." Mommy followed sternly. I jump up with excitement "yes Mommy, thank you Mommy" as I bow walking backwards so I dont miss a moment of adoring my Mommy. I step into the bathroom and start the water. Fiddle with the temp to make sure it is where Mommy likes. I get the tub fairly full, and reach out to Mommy to let her know it is ready. Mommy enters with her grace, already ready to step right into the tub. Mmmmh Mommy runs her fingers over my shoulder, as she struts by. I feel the *** flowing and I have to mentally keep myself relaxed, as Mommy has not said I can stand at attn for her yet. I better not erect to early! Last time Mommy made me pay for it. 🤫😁🤫

Mommy steps in and relaxes into the water as she was pleased with the temp I drew. "Mmmm good boy" Mommy softly says. "Thank you Mommy!" I reply with the added energy flowing through me from hearing her sexy voice say those two lil words toward me. I rise to exit the room, giving Mommy her time. And going to report back to where Mommy likes me to rest. As I step fwd Mommy reaches up grabs the leash she placed on my collar last month. The chain rattles and I drop to attention. Mommy looks at me with a stern ,oh so sexy look. And says "Just where do you think your going?" I start to reply "back to" Mommy speaks over me, "I did not release you. YOU are going to bathe me tonight. START with my toes. Understand boy?" I am sure I had a shit eatin grin on, "Yes Mommy, mmm thank you Mommy!" I scoot over to the cabinet to grab a cloth to wash Mommy with. As I reach in, I run my finger down the stack to see which feels the softest. "Hurry up boy!" Yes Mommy" flies out of my mouth in return, before I even thought about it. I grab the one my finger is on and I take a quick and long step to return to Mommy as quickly as I can.

When I reach back to the base of the tub. Mommy lifts her left foot "here you go boy. Do NOT miss a spot. Undedstand boy?" "As you wish Mommy" I reply, trying to hold back my eagerness. I gently place one hand under Mommy's foot. While soaking the cloth with the other. I bring it above Mommy's foot and wring it out pouring the warm water over her foot, past her ankle and down her calf till it hits the water body in the tub. From there I start with the big toe and lean towards taking my time to ensure the caliber of the job I do will show Mommy how I feel about her. I must admit my hand was smacked a few times for missing a soft spot of her volumptuous self. Inside I do think Mommy smacked me, bc she was enjoying where I was and did not want me to stop. Caressing tender places of a seductive body, mmmm (excuse me,) feels more intense when it is under water. But of course I replied "sorry Mommy, here you go Mommy."

After rubbing on Mommys shoulders to close her bath. Mommy steps up, "towel boy." I lunge sliding across the floor to grab her a towel from the cabinets. As I reappdoach Mommy with her towel. D*** it over her shoulders. Patting her shining body dry. I offer her my hand to assist her stepping onto the rug with her feet. Where I stumble down to my knees to dry her from her waist down her thick firm thighs back to her toes. Where all of this evening had began. I rise to go toss the towel into the hamper. And again I feel the tug on the chain that hangs from my collar. Again Mommy says "Where do You think You are going boy!" My head turns my hand lifts the towel. "To place this" "Boy" Mommy says speaking firmly over my reply again. As if Mommy did not know where I was going. 🫣 "How good do you think you did cleaning Mommy's body tonight my boy?" Mommy says with her alluring voice. Causing me to melt in front of her. "I would say a Very good job, Mommy." I clear my throat a pinch.
"I hope Mommy is pleased." Mommy gives me a tug on the leash pulling in tight to her. Her eyes focus in on mine. Quietly she asks "did you clean all of Mommy tonight?" To follow Mommy's tone I whisper in return "yes Mommy" awaiting to see how pleased my Mommy is. Mommy spins a 180° from me stepping away from me, with a sharp tug on the chain. With a happy, sharp tone Mommy commands "Good, bc you are going to worship me, every where you bathed me tonight. I wamt to see how good of a job you really feel you did." Followed by a mischevious laugh. Now pulling on the leash to ensure I was right behind Mommy.