A dirty little love poem.

[Deleted Member]

Man with the sad eyes look deep into mine,

And I'll show you where the path to true love lies,

You tell me your secrets and I'll tell you mine, 

 

And we'll take turns in frills, ribbon and lace,

With my hands I'll cup your beautiful face.

Lay bonds of silk around my wrists,

In ecstasy we both shall writhe and twist.

I want to swing across the stars

Above the ocean so wide,

To where you ache for me to be by your side.

 

Star-crossed lovers in a world so vast,

Be gentle with my heart because I want this to last.

Edited December 7, 2022 by Deleted Member
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[Deleted Member]

your poem is so full of amazing emotions xx

[Wolfbrother]

Beautiful and evocative. Well written. I really love that line "I want to swing across the stars." ❤

[HandsOn81]

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.

[Deleted Member]

Thanks for lovely compliments and the likes. I wrecked something that had the potential to be great, but it's nice to post and feel heard.

[Deleted Member]

…where the path ti true live RESIDES…

My sophomoric attention to revive LIES from verse about love.

[Deleted Member]

1 hour ago, Stag4LTR said:

…where the path ti true live RESIDES…

My sophomoric attention to revive LIES from verse about love.

I'm sorry are you complimenting me or attempting to correct my work?

[Deleted Member]

On 12/8/2022 at 1:45 AM, YesDaddyYes said:

I'm sorry are you complimenting me or attempting to correct my work?

Your poem is an authentic expression of your emotions and your soul. Not even God, the mighty, has any right to dare to "correct" an iota, so even less any of us mere mortals.  

[Coyfishy5]

That’s a great poem good for u