Who am I?

[x-****]

I am the one that you saw first

I am the laughter that turns your head

I am the eyes that tell a story

I am the pages of your favorite book

I am the silky petals of a rose

I am the rain that beats in your heart

I am the the one that makes our first kiss your last

I am the one you see as you dream

I am the one you see when you wake

I am the one that makes you think

I am the one who knows what you’re thinking

I am the one that knows you

I am the one that supports you

I am your best friend

I am your forever

~BlueDiamond 💙💎

Edited March 24, 2024 by x-BlueDiamond-x
Added a line

[Mr****]

You are the one that wants me

[Ju****]

Beautiful

[Deleted Member]

“I am the one that makes our first kiss your last”. What a beautiful line. (You wrote “the” twice, but the piece loses none of its beauty however).

[Deleted Member]

P7

[x-****]

8 hours ago, intellectualruffian said:

“I am the one that makes our first kiss your last”. What a beautiful line. (You wrote “the” twice, but the piece loses none of its beauty however).

Thank you for your kind words.  Now only if I could edit the second “the” *sighs*. Perhaps I should read my scribbles a fourth time before posting.

[Deleted Member]

6 minutes ago, x-BlueDiamond-x said:

Thank you for your kind words.  Now only if I could edit the second “the” *sighs*. Perhaps I should read my scribbles a fourth time before posting.

Apologies if I come across as being like the grammar police. It really is a lovely piece. That’s the standout line for me, and likely how I noticed the minor error in the first place.

[x-****]

45 minutes ago, intellectualruffian said:

Apologies if I come across as being like the grammar police. It really is a lovely piece. That’s the standout line for me, and likely how I noticed the minor error in the first place.

No apologies needed, I am the grammar police 🤭 Speaking properly is important, you can never make another first impression.

[Deleted Member]

4 minutes ago, x-BlueDiamond-x said:

No apologies needed, I am the grammar police 🤭 Speaking properly is important, you can never make another first impression.

A woman after my own heart. Apology retracted then 😉😊.