Sub Earth

[La****]

Sub Earth.
When you are all dressed up
in your astronaut attire:
corset, fishnets, the knickers with the slit.
but your flight has been grounded,
your launch canceled.
You still climb in, strap up.
All fours on the spanking table,
a line of instruments ready
to use and *** you,
waiting off to the side,
but while the countdown starts,
5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
Thwack. One, Sir. Smack. Two, Sir.
The engines don't rumble
there's no fire igniting deep within.
Space is there, right there,
winking above,
But your down here
an ant
crawling through the dungeon.
Cries and moans
don't turn you off. They hold you.
Here, in reality.
Your shoulder twinges.
You hair is caught in your mouth.
Minor inconveniences
that normally would bleed away
into nothingness
demand your attention.
The voice that talks to you
doesn't echo in the empty chamber
of your mind. You don't
arch like a cat against his hand,
mindlessly press your face into him
like a cat.
You just exist. Enjoy. Catalogue
the stings and burns and bruises.
You don't fly. You don't soar.
You don't escape.

[La****]

Damn. Balls. Hell. Why is there no edit function? And why don't I proofread?

[bl****]

12 minutes ago, Lady_Char said:

Damn. Balls. Hell. Why is there no edit function? And why don't I proofread?

Because you're one of the truly brave you type without spell check or grammar edits lol

[La****]

3 minutes ago, blueyedguy said:

Because you're one of the truly brave you type without spell check or grammar edits lol

*stupid

[bl****]

1 minute ago, Lady_Char said:

*stupid

Or bold and daring haha or coffee deprived and forgetful

[Lu****]

Idk that whole story was pretty brave just typed out

[Ki****]

Good poem

[Deleted Member]

I just light something on fire instead

[Fi****]

That's some groovy word flow, kinda reminds me of lewis Carrols work.

[TM****]

A sad thought nonetheless. 😢
To be brave and say not today is the only way to get away. The hope they stay and not be ***ed off for days.
The risk should be taken. Even if the heart is breaking. For life is too short to be lived mistaken.
Well written bad or well that's the way it made me feel.