Story i wrote from scratch. Tell me what you think.

[NC****]

Your smile gets bigger as you stare of into my eyes.  I think you can feel how bad i want to kiss you. You break out of your spell as I grab your hand and ask if your ok. You say yes with the smile still on your face. I smile back and get lost in your eyes as they hypnotize me. I picture myself gazing into your eyes as one leg rest on my shoulder as I pin the other to the bed. My harden dick strokes your hunny pot with perfection as your suculant breast bounce with every stroke. Our lips taste each other as your eyes beg for more. A lil Kids scream at the next table breaks me out of my fantasy. we smile at each other again knowing that we both are thinking naughty thoughts. You take sip of your drink, I must be day dreaming again because it was the most sexist sip I've ever seen. Your soft lips wrap tightly around the straw. You look up at me with seductive eyes as if it was my dick and you were trying to suck the soul out of me.  "Are you done teasing me? " I ask.  You say "No". With a evil smile on your face. I bite my lip to keep my nasty thoughts from coming out.  The waiter comes to the table to refill our drinks. You ask her for the check.  She says ok and placed it on the table. I catch the hint, pull out my wallet and put the cash with the ticket. I quickly stand up and offer my hand to you as you step out. You look good as i watch you walk pass me. Tight yoga pants and a belly shirt that hugs your curves so nicely. I want to slap your booty as we walk out but I decide to wait. We get to the parking lot and you turn to me and say "what now? ". I grab your hand and say "follow me". we walk to the hotel beside the restaurant.  I walk to the counter and ask for a room. You hug me from behind hands running from my chest to my dick. The female behind the desk can't see you so you grab a hand full. I look back and smile. You laugh as she hands me the key. I grab your hand and pull you to the elevator. We get on,  the door closes, and i pull you to me.  Our lips meet for the first time and fireworks go off as we lose ourselves in the kiss. The door opens and you pull me off the elevator.  We walk down the hallway to room 369, I open the door and pull you in.  The door closes and I push you against it.  Our lips meet again and this time the kiss is deeper. I break from your lips and start to kiss your neck. Your moan gets louder as my lips touch your neck. You push me away and grab me by the shirt and pull me to the bed. You push me on the bed and unbuckle my pants.  My dick is at full salute and you slowly unwrap it from my boxers..............

You look in my eyes deeply and you kiss the tip of my dick then slowly submerge it in your mouth. It feels so good I let ot a moan. You go faster as you try to make me moan louder. I try to fight it but the combination of your tongue and lips feel to good. You feel me getting weaker and you stop. You slowly stroke it in your hand smiling as if you know you won.