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The Transience of Love......APoem


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Ever hopeful hearts will lie

Upon love's shifting sands,

But love, like youth, will crack and dry

Rent by time's bitter hand.

 

In my wildest, wanton dreams

Into your arms I'm thrust,

Upon life's ever bubbling streams

Where romance turns to dust.

 

Oh! let desire take hasty flight

And may love take a leap,

And with one disenchanted breath,

Fall silently asleep.

 

Tammy N.

Not sure what the other ‘ffs’ comment is about, maybe they’re confused. I really enjoyed it 🖤

54 minutes ago, Handsomebrutha said:

You are amazing 💗

Thank you for your kind comment!

34 minutes ago, Kinky_kat said:

Beautifully written - i really like it x

Thank you.

5 hours ago, Thebian said:

That was just divine, thank you. It really spoke to me.

Thank you for liking ..

  • 2 weeks later...

It's such a shame you're profile criteria prevents me from being able to speak to you. Compatible or not, it isn't often you encounter someone with a fine grasp of poetic verse who also poses their potential suitors with puzzles to solve. 

The poem was fantastic, akin to something Thomas Hardy would have written - - I'm getting a beeney cliff type vibe.  Once again, tis a shame we aren't able to at least have a platonic chat. 

 

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