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Bdsm 

I may not be a fan of ropes. Kinda like bounding you without hopes.

Although in a stalling relationship it might open some doors. Its not supposed to feel like doing chores. 

Within it you can be a top or a bottom. Tho it doesnt work like pushing a button. 

It doesnt have to be like a religion. But it can also never draw division. 

I kinda like it in a way. Maybe not proper hardcore but enough for me to make my day.

Posted
A haiku.

Whips and chains? No thanks.
Just treat me like a real boy.
Am I vanilla?
Posted
9 minutes ago, Totentag said:

A haiku.

Whips and chains? No thanks.
Just treat me like a real boy.
Am I vanilla?

Not a bad one. To answer i dont think so coz you like what you like and its all fine.

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@AdmanZ Do you mind if I change your original poem?:

I may be full of false hopes. Like me bounding you in ropes.
I could tie you, bind you and more. For you it would be nothing of a chore.
As it should be, with whom you adore. But these are my false hopes, and nothing more.
I could be top or bottom, which ever you prefer. I would be content to do most anything, to be with her.
You don’t have to devote yourself to me like a religion, I just need something more than then this division.
Maybe some day things will change. From false hope to some causal play.
And then, maybe then, these false hopes will change. When you message me, and say “Hey.”

Posted
4 hours ago, aCuriousCrow said:

@AdmanZ Do you mind if I change your original poem?:

I may be full of false hopes. Like me bounding you in ropes.
I could tie you, bind you and more. For you it would be nothing of a chore.
As it should be, with whom you adore. But these are my false hopes, and nothing more.
I could be top or bottom, which ever you prefer. I would be content to do most anything, to be with her.
You don’t have to devote yourself to me like a religion, I just need something more than then this division.
Maybe some day things will change. From false hope to some causal play.
And then, maybe then, these false hopes will change. When you message me, and say “Hey.”
 

I don't mind it at all. It's even better than my original, you're talented. I admit i just write as an amateur like as a hobby but yeah like i just pay attention to rhymes anyway.

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