English bdsm fantasy story

[Ra****]

So i dont really write storys. This actually is my first short(ish) one.
Let me know what you think?

Here it goes:
It was a dark yet warm day, a day filled with sun and light, joy and some sadness, but also darkness. Little did he knew that is the day where he would meet her, the girl, the rising star, the light in darkness, her. She is the one he has always wanted to be with even though he would not be only with one person, she is the one, the one he will one day will love to have. But also the one he will one day share with love. He doesn't know her but she knows him intimitly. Because you see, she can see into the minds of others. Not read, but see truely who the person. But what she sees scared her quite a bit, the feelings, she doesn't know how to place them. The affection, the tingling feeling, the ***, the amazing ***, the pleasure all of it combined, it shows her there future and she has never felt anything like it. So she turns around and starts walking before he can say anything. Lucky enough he sees her and goes after her, he shouts and yells but she is to much in her own head so she doesn't not hear him. Eventually he catches up and touches her shoulder, she turns around looks at him, his hand touches her throat on accident and he sees her shiver, he sees the pleasure in her beautiful eyes, but he doesn't let her know that he sees, so he removes his hand and asks her whats wrong, why did you run away? She looks into his eyes and she says i dont know. I just had some feeling. But feelings are not bad he replies, she says well they are if they frighten you. Well that depends on the kind of *** that you feel, does it not? he asks her, with this naughty grin on his face which melts her even more. She feels her knees slowly become weak by the way he looks at her, the way she feels he wants her. She feels that she even slowly is alread starting to get wet. And her face becomes red he looks at her again with that grin she seemed to love so much and says with a certain tone how cute, your feeling shy. I must really have some effect on you "love". She heard the slight sarcastic tone at the word love and it makes almost drop to her knees. Not because of obedience or because hes rude or doing much at the time but the way she feels he wants her, the way she feels all he wants to do to her makes her almost spontanysly submit to his every will. But you see she is a brat, so she gets her mind back up no, she thinks i wont let him not that easely, well at least not yet she thinks with a smile on her face. He sees the smile and says what is going on in that cute dirty mind of yours love? And she loses it but again she tries not to show, but he noticed, he says good girl, With that same grim again. She sees the grim and says fuck it just come to me already. He says no, not yet, your not ready yet. He walks over to her lays one little kiss on her head and gives her a hugg. By the way im Raoul he says. She feels his strength and is surprised. She says im thali, i can read people. He says thats a very nice skill to have. I also read people, so she says really you got the gift too? Oh no little one, i dont read people that way, i read then when were playing, i read what they want and do my best to make you begg for it. Why would i begg you, if i can just get it from someone else without begging she asks and he just looks at her with that grim we know so well by now and she realises it. All they will be, all they will do together, and all the pleasure and massive intense orgasms that go along with it. As many times as they can handle and more.