Submission doesn't mean subjected

[Fathership]

I have never felt the need,  

To ha*rm your flesh, to make you bl*eed, 

To bite deep enough to leave a scar 

To me that feels a step too far. 

 

The bindings are to help express 

You are a thing of beauty I’d possess. 

To hold you, keep you, make you mine 

Your gift to me as we entwine 

 

To tie you down while at my leisure 

I explore the things that give you pleasure. 

To make of you my willing whore 

To make you moan and writhe and more. 

 

By far the strongest chains that bind 

Are the links crafted, mind to mind. 

And as you give yourself to me 

Reciprocal, I give myself to thee. 

[Pa****]

"Submission doesn't mean subjected" - what a fantastic, succinct way of getting the message across

[Fathership]

5 minutes ago, PaulKrendler said:

"Submission doesn't mean subjected" - what a fantastic, succinct way of getting the message across

Thanks man!

[Deleted Member]

Well said! Love it (except the “whore” word) great expressions hun

[Fathership]

2 minutes ago, fort-waynelabia said:

Well said! Love it (except the “whore” word) great expressions hun

Thanks!  I appreciate the support and the feedback.

I acknowledge it's a word slightly out of step with the rest of the message, I was trying for a little shock and also to to subvert the word.  I guess I got halfway there!   

[Deleted Member]

4 minutes ago, Fathership said:

Thanks!  I appreciate the support and the feedback.

I acknowledge it's a word slightly out of step with the rest of the message, I was trying for a little shock and also to to subvert the word.  I guess I got halfway there!   

Hey it’s what works for you and that’s all that matters. I don’t like derogatory words but that’s just me. You write well.

[Pr****]

This was so beautifully done! I absolutely love it 💞