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LethalPersuasion - Feedback please. Are my stories too long?

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1 hour ago, New_to_this_25 said:

This is so hot 🔥. Not too long, imo.

Thank you! & thanks for the feedback. I’m enjoying writing these 😈🔥

Etiam_mi_rex

Well written. It flowed nicely like a metronome. The only thing I missed was what the previous order she/you had disobeyed.

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12 minutes ago, Etiam_mi_rex said:

Well written. It flowed nicely like a metronome. The only thing I missed was what the previous order she/you had disobeyed.

Scroll down for Part 1, although it doesn’t say Part 1 (yeah I know. I’m annoying right?). It begins “We stood at the bar…..”. From here on in they will be headed Part 2, Part 3 etc.

Se****
13 minutes ago, Etiam_mi_rex said:

Well written. It flowed nicely like a metronome. The only thing I missed was what the previous order she/you had disobeyed.

PS. Thank you for the lovely compliment.

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