The Taming.... /THOUGHTS?

[thatmauiguy]

I sent a friend this text. She told me I should write porn... Thought I would post it here and see what ppl think...

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Thought maybe youd like to hear what im going to do this little slut girl while im stuffing my cock inside all your tight fuck holes. Your naughty little fuckgirl ass bent over and tied to the kitchen stools.
You will be told to tie your own ankles to the stools in front of the bay window facing the road. You will be a good girl and tie yourself one ankle at a time.  Im going to bend you over the stools with your ass on display for anybody coming up the hill to see. Bent over with your hands tied behind your back holding the hairbrush handle i tell you to put in your ass, legs spread and pussy splayed wide open, youre going to tell me you are my good lil gurl. That "you are my good lil fukgirl waiting to serve your purpose as daddys cumrag." While sayin "cumrag"
my cock will be stuffed in your mouth and you will have to finish describing what a dirty lil cumrag you are choking and gagging. My cock all the way to the back of your fuckwhore mouth! I will pull my cock out of your mouth, show it to you, as i look you in the eye, rub it on your throat, your cheek, up to your ear, put it in front of your face again and tell you to look at me as you apologize for being a self serving little bitch. As you are saying those exact words "self serving bitch" you will find your throat stuffed full of my cock again and me telling you "look at me while you say you are sorry with my cock in your mouth"
"Say yer sorry for forcing me to punish you because yer such a juvenile little fuk! Gurl!"
I will act like i dont see the people passing by who notice the dirty little fuktoy in the window bent over naked getting her face stuffed full of cock while she fuks herself in the ass w/ a brush. 
They wont know its for her own good because she just cant figure out how to keep her cockhole shut if she doesnt have anything nice to say. 
But you will. You know you are in trouble and getting what you deserve for acting like an immature stubborn little cumgirl. You know you will be being a good girl swallowing my cock like yer starving, and its
food you only get by doing what you are told... After your punishment and you acknowledge the need for an adjustment in your attitude, if youre a good girl I will untie you and press you face first into the window so we can fuck in front of whoever happens by on the street. Be here at one. The new tube top, red jean shorts, red panties w/ the bow, no shoes. 

 

 

[thatmauiguy]

No thoughts? Somebody, onebody, Anybody?

[lo****]

Very provocative but it would be nice to know I the backstory. What did she do? What did she say? Tease the reader and show don’t tell. Paint the picture with words.