Mind sex

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The words men speak seem so much more powerful than boring words from a dictionary. Words from dictionaries and books made her feel nothing besides boredom, it created a lack of interest for most things in life. However, some words did provoke feelings in her. Some feelings she ran from, others she wasn’t familiar with. “Forc*fully”, “Willing”, “Serve”, “cry”, “beg", "wait”, “ab*se”, “listen", "door”, “basement” etc. She searched for books that contained the smut she was yearning for, but when she read it, it wasn’t the same as something concealed. She didn’t want the story of a ***d orgasm written out on paper. She wanted the mystery. She wanted to find it herself. She wanted to earn it. She thrived off of hints that were dropped in sentences that had nothing to do with sex—any and everything that came out of a man’s mouth, she sexualized. It’s all that consumed her mind. But sex isn’t what she wanted. She wanted the taboo, the lure, the aura of a man taking control of her in all aspects. She understands her place in a man’s world, if he wanted her to have thoughts, he would give them to her. Men direct her, and she will understand that whatever they have to say is in her best interest, therefore, she would obey.

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Well written. Great vaguely suggested visuals. There's one sentence however that may be restated for accuracy IMHO. The line stating"...hints that were dropped in sentences (by men?) having nothing to do with sex - any and everything that came out of a man's mouth, she sexualized." My personal experience and observations have convinced me that, by definition, it's IMPOSSIBLE for a man to speak anything "having nothing to do with sex". And even if a man could somehow do that, he'd be wrong. The mere utterance of words exiting his mouth means he's absolutely wrong. Period. Whatever he said, heard or unheard, is incorrect at best and most likely a lie. Not sure how that would effect the remainder of the story, if even at all. And again, this is only from my experience. I hope I'm wrong and you know I'm 100 joking. This truly is very well written and more difficult than most would expect. Keep it up. The writing, that is.

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Reno13: Haha! I see what you’re getting at. Maybe i will incorporate that into another story. Thank you for your complements and feedback! ❤️‍🔥

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43 minutes ago, Reno13 said:

Well written. Great vaguely suggested visuals. There's one sentence however that may be restated for accuracy IMHO. The line stating"...hints that were dropped in sentences (by men?) having nothing to do with sex - any and everything that came out of a man's mouth, she sexualized." My personal experience and observations have convinced me that, by definition, it's IMPOSSIBLE for a man to speak anything "having nothing to do with sex". And even if a man could somehow do that, he'd be wrong. The mere utterance of words exiting his mouth means he's absolutely wrong. Period. Whatever he said, heard or unheard, is incorrect at best and most likely a lie. Not sure how that would effect the remainder of the story, if even at all. And again, this is only from my experience. I hope I'm wrong and you know I'm 100 joking. This truly is very well written and more difficult than most would expect. Keep it up. The writing, that is.

Reno13: Haha! I see what you’re getting at. Maybe i will incorporate that into another story. Thank you for your complements and feedback! ❤️‍🔥

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