Deleted Member Posted July 5, 2023 Once upon a time, there existed a passionate story that held the promise of an enchanting night, a tale of intensity that could have set the world ablaze. I and he, two souls intermingling in a dance of fervor, stood on the precipice of an extraordinary connection. Alas, fate played its mischievous hand, and he, lacking the wisdom to embrace my fire, let slip away a passion that could have transformed his very existence. In his presence, my passion radiated like a blazing sun, igniting his heart and rendering him breathless. My unwavering intensity, a *** to be reckoned with, captivated his every thought and moved him in ways he never knew possible. His soul became entangled with the flames of my spirit, drawn to the inferno of emotions that matched the burning desires within him. But alas, the weight of my fiery intensity proved too much for him to bear. He, not fully comprehending the depths of my passion, allowed *** to cloud his judgment. Too afraid to embrace the fervent connection and the fire that blazed between us, he stumbled upon his own insecurities. Now he laments the loss of those moments, realizing the magnitude of his mistake, for he failed to cherish what was standing right before him. The embers of our passionate love, once stoked by his touch, have dwindled into an empty void, casting a somber shadow over his days and nights. Oh, the passion he unknowingly discarded. The one that got away, leaving him to wander through hollow possibilities, forever yearning for the intensity that slipped through his grasp. The nights are filled with echoes of my laughter, the touch of my fingertips lingering in his mind, a constant reminder of what could have been. But find solace, for it is he who shall bear the weight of his decision. In his pursuit of fleeting encounters and superficial connections, he may try to convince himself that he has moved on. Yet, deep within, amidst the whispered regrets that haunt his dreams, he knows he will never find another like me. A passion so raw, so intense, so genuinely profound. I was the muse that ignited the very core of his being, the one who could have offered him a passion so extraordinary it could set the entire universe aflame. And though he may never fully grasp the magnitude of his loss, the truth remains unwavering: he let go of a passion so transcendent, a fire that could have transformed his life forever. As time marches on, I will rise above the ashes of his missed opportunity, blossoming into the extraordinary person I was always meant to become. And he, forever to dwell in the shadows of what could have been, will roam a lonely path, forever unable to fathom the immense passion that was his to embrace and cherish. ---------------------- -Love Ozzie x
Deleted Member Posted July 5, 2023 Author The fault was both of yours, not just his. Y'all should both move on.
Ki**** Posted July 5, 2023 If I’m not the living breathing epitome of this post. I had this with an amazing person to squandered it for did you know what it all truly meant and now I sit here in my own hello death of endless intrusive, thought pondering if I can ever recover from this.
Deleted Member Posted July 6, 2023 Author Someone has pointed out to me that this piece I submitted above 'Once upon a Time' and then posted on my page is being seen as a confessional or as though written from personal experience. I want to apologise to the community. This piece is actually a creative writing story that I wrote for an assignment in college. I got excited about the fact you can share stories and writings and I re-worked this one trying to make it more romantic to share here on Fet... I didn't realise it would be taken as a literal experience. I want to apologise as I have been told now that this was wrong and people would take it as though I lived this and was hurt really badly and that it will make people feel sorry for me. I should have made it clear that it was just a story. I am terribly sorry. I apologise to everyone. It is just a story. If I ever submit anything else... I will make sure to say it's a story. I'm really sorry to anyone who was concerned... I'm sorry. -Love Ozzie x
Ki**** Posted July 6, 2023 Your creative writing is amazing. I would love to chat with you more about it if you don’t mind. It’s not letting me PM you.
Ki**** Posted July 6, 2023 I mine is set to open for everyone. I think your filter is definitely not letting me Message.
Deleted Member Posted July 6, 2023 Author (edited) Hi Kingslee, I'm getting this message when trying to message you: Sorry, but you can't message this member as they're using message filter criteria. You could send a compliment instead. I've cleared all my filters for you. -Ozzie Edited July 6, 2023 by Deleted Member
He**** Posted July 6, 2023 OMG that's like reading about the one who I parted ways with, he is like that forever encountering superficial connections. Apart from his departed wife, I think I was close to being the longest. I would have done absolutely anything for him, and did, but it somehow wasn't good enough. We had so much in common it was like he was made for me and I for him, but not to be. Still kills me, but somewhere, sometime, someone will appreciate what I am willing to do for one I cherrish. Love your work Ozzie and hi from an actual Aussie.
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