Age gap

[Bu****]

I wrote this to show a young woman what an older man sees and feels when he's found her


The Art of Seduction
(An Erotic Spoken Word Piece)

I am not a boy chasing the rush of a finish line.
I am a man…
Tempered by time,
Sharpened by silence,
Softened by study—
Of skin,
Of sound,
Of surrender.

I don’t just fuck.
I compose.
I don’t just touch.
I tune in—
to the trembling in your thighs,
to the hitch in your breath,
to the hush that falls
right before the moan escapes your lips like a secret.

Younger men…
They rush.
They count.
They conquer.

But I worship.

I don’t see a body.
I see terrain.
A landscape I want to map with my mouth,
Every curve a question
Only my hands know how to answer.

I study you.
The way you melt when I breathe against your ear.
The way your hips twitch when I drag my tongue—slow—over your clit.
The way your moan breaks like thunder when I hit that spot—just right—
again… and again… and again.

I don’t need to ask if it feels good.
I feel it.
In the way you lose your words,
In the way you pull me deeper with your legs wrapped tight around my back
like you’re trying to keep me inside forever.

Some nights—
I’ll fuck you like a storm.
Hands gripping.
Thrusts pounding.
Your name gone, replaced by mine.

Other nights—
I’ll press my chest to yours and move so slowly
you’ll swear time has stopped just to watch.

And when I go down on you?
Don’t call it a favor.
It’s a devotion.

I’ll spread your thighs like scripture
and taste you like gospel.
My tongue will speak fluently in your wetness,
writing prayers in circles
until your back arches in holy surrender.

And when I slide into you—
thick, deliberate, deep—
it won’t be with urgency.
It’ll be with purpose.
With knowing.
With reverence.

Because I’ve learned…
The orgasm is not the goal.
It’s the gateway.
To the unraveling.
To the breaking.
To the becoming.

I don’t want just your climax.
I want your chaos.
Your cries.
Your whispered curses when the pleasure’s too much
and not enough all at once.

I want the part of you
no one else has ever earned.
The part that sings when your soul’s been kissed from the inside out.

So let the boys boast about numbers.
Let them chase the next body.
Let them wonder why they’re always forgotten.

I’ll be here—
Tongue slick, hands steady,
Heart open,
Eyes locked on yours
as I make you tremble
and remind you exactly
what it means
to be wanted.
Worshipped.
Wrecked.
And remembered.

This…
is not just sex.
This…
is the art of seduction.
And I—
am its master.

[Deleted Member]

Beautifully written

[Kwelle]

Amen!
Wow amazing writing! ♥

[co****]

Beautiful I could read this over and over again

[Sm****]

Outstanding work good sir

[ge****]

Nicely done sir

[na****]

I'm s***chless. I am very impressed.

[Bu****]

Everyone that doesn't understand perpetuates the stereotypical bs he's a creepy perv and she's got Daddy issues.... C'est la vie

[le****]

Wow,we'll said

[Deleted Member]

Beautifully composed

[Deviant_Ric]

Like warm caramel… perfect. I applaud your observation and eloquence Sir.

[Deleted Member]

Well written and spot on

[To****]

Love it. Says everything I try to convey to these younger women. Boys think of theor own pleasure and ASSUME if they are enjoying it, so should she. Men think only of their partners pleasure and the joy comes from KNOWING she is loving it.

[Deleted Member]

You got it absolutely right.

[mi****]

🙋‍♀️Check please

[A3****]

Bravo💋👏🏽

[bo****]

Dang!!!

[Deleted Member]

Extremely well said!!! Hitting the nail squarely on the head with every word and line!!! Bravo!! 🙌

[un****]

You could always be with someone close to your own age. It’s really sad honestly.

[Deleted Member]

I had one just like her. This is all very relatable to me. It went on for two years. Now that it's over, and I've very much lived all of this you've described so well, I'm afraid that I'm ruined for life. I'm afraid that absolutely nothing will ever come close to this experience with this beautiful soul/body/mind. I was ready to run away with her, she wasn't ready to alienate her family, who were very much against her and I. Damn.

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8 hours ago, g7377 said:

You could always be with someone close to your own age. It’s really sad honestly.

You could keep your comments to yourself instead of being a judgemental POS. Is there a reason anyone should give a chit about your attempt to shame someone for what they like? It's really disgusting of you honestly.

[Ta****]

1 hour ago, SmokeyJ said:

You could keep your comments to yourself instead of being a judgemental POS. Is there a reason anyone should give a chit about your attempt to shame someone for what they like? It's really disgusting of you honestly.

The problem is how age-gaps have been idolized for ages when it's usually detrimental to the younger person. There are way more beautiful works from artists whom we now see as predators.
Finally we as a society are sick of it and call out how sad it is when middle-aged people prey on 20somethings or younger.

[Deleted Member]

Me as a woman don’t see any single point to date the older guy or even a guy my age. What for? For hot sex and sessions is a huge like of 20 something guys.

[Co****]

Well I think your writing is Beautiful, 😍

Isn't this supposed to be a site for non judgemental people,?

[Ta****]

22 minutes ago, CosmicAngel said:

Well I think your writing is Beautiful, 😍

Isn't this supposed to be a site for non judgemental people,?

No, it's a site for perversion.