A Gift: Part 1

[Deleted Member]

As owner of the intellectual property of the content contained within this story, I politely request that my work not be stolen or plagiarised without my signed permission. I thank you and I hope you enjoy.

 

I wish to say thank you to all of my avid readers. This is my tenth short story, and it feels a little bit like an anniversary. As such, I think the title is rather fitting. Here is to double digits, *he holds up his glass* cheers.

 

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He had finally arrived at the mansion, a small yet looming building stretching for many paces in both directions. The front of the house was covered in ivy, with an arched front, stone entrance and large wooden doors that seemed quite regal. He approached them and lifted the giant, wrought-iron door-knocker, taking a step back and placing his hat on his chest.

 

The heavy doors creaked open, an older woman drawing them apart just enough for him to step through. He bowed with a gentle smile, never taking his eyes from her, and she smiled back with a gesture for him to enter.

"Please, Master Reign, come in."

"Thank you," he entered.

"May I take your hat, Master Reign?"

"No thank you, Mistress Madame. You have a lovely home."

"Thank you."

 

He took in the view quickly, appreciating the elegant stonework and gorgeous architecture, but returned his attention to her. She wore a deep purple dress, slim-fitting and complimenting her physique. Her hair was blond and bound in a tight coil behind her head. She was not old, but neither was she fantastically young, and she had aged well. Her face was not made up, as was his request, and her buxom chest bulged through the window of her dress. He took a deep breath, containing his lust, and smiled again. He wanted quite badly to take this woman here and now, to kiss her and play with her body, but this was not the time, nor was she a Submissive.

"Thank you for inviting me."

"You’re most welcome. If you would please follow me this way?"

 

Her hand gestured once again, through the lobby and down a corridor into her study. Her purple high-heels clicked and clacked on the marble floor, before thudding on the thin red carpet of the study. She guided him to a seat near the windows, facing inwards so that he could admire the bookshelves, and he sat slowly. It was a deep chair, rather wide and quite blocky in shape, but nonetheless it was comfortable to sit in. The black leather was well-kept, with a dull gleam from moderate use, and he relaxed into it with his hat placed on the small table beside him.

"Please allow me to fetch your gift," she said, and left the room through a door on the right.

[Deleted Member]

I am interested to know what people think of this part, since it is not sexual. It is literally just story, so although it builds the narrative, is it perhaps less interesting from a reading point of view?

[Wo****]

It may not be sexual but it still holds your attention and leaves you wanting more. I need to find out what the gift is, why it's being given. It has a delightful, subtle hint of tension I think, in a good way.

[Deleted Member]

It may not be erotica. But it is still sexually charged. If it weren't intended to be I dont think you would have described the leather to have "a dull gleam from moderate use." That sentence alone gives your word tactile appeal.

[Deleted Member]

Not sexual ? At the same time hinting of it. “ she’s not submissive “ the gift, stopping on a cliff hanger. I need/want more. 

Very much like reading your stories. 

[Deleted Member]

10 hours ago, Qu33n_N0v4 said:

That sentence alone gives your word tactile appeal

Your thorough attention to my story is delightfully appreciated. I am glad my words continue to inspire and impress

[Deleted Member]

11 minutes ago, Aimil2019 said:

I need/want more. 

You, @Aimil2019, are as insatiable as @LazyPiratesBounty. I am extremely grateful. You have message filters that prevent me from messaging you, which is a shame, but I hope you continue to enjoy my never-ending stream of fun. 

Edited November 19, 2019 by Deleted Member

[Deleted Member]

Looking forward to part 2 💋 😊 

[Deleted Member]

I most definitely will as long as you keep writing!

[Deleted Member]

20 minutes ago, Kitty-1976 said:

Looking forward to part 2 💋 😊 

 

19 minutes ago, Aimil2019 said:

I most definitely will as long as you keep writing!

I have no shortage of stories in the pipeline

[Deleted Member]

Look forward to them. 

[Deleted Member]

24 minutes ago, Aimil2019 said:

Look forward to them. 

It would be nice to talk one to one, as well, but your filters will not let me

[Deleted Member]

You have my attention. 

[Catalyst87]

On 11/18/2019 at 7:54 PM, DanteReign said:

I am interested to know what people think of this part, since it is not sexual. It is literally just story, so although it builds the narrative, is it perhaps less interesting from a reading point of view?

I love it because it builds mystery and there is a suspense woven into the words

[ReddRabbit]

I find that building the narrative and/or scene can just as erotic and  important as the actual ”event”, or juicy bits, if you will, themselves.  It gives one context. It’s the difference between erotica and pornography, frankly. 

 

[Deleted Member]

48 minutes ago, ReddRabbit said:

the difference between erotica and pornography

I agree with that. Thank you.