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I've never heard anyone else ever describe it like that you actually had me mesmerized and wishing I was there
You really draw the reader in with the weight of silence—how it’s filled not with noise, but with anticipation. But what about the sound? The deliberate click of his shoes on the floor as he circles, each step a countdown. That rhythm—slow, controlled—like a metronome for your nerves. Have you ever written about that?
I am a benevolent daddy who loves to give his good girl praise but some of this I think I could incorporate.
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