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If anyone would be willing to look over my dating profile, help me with a few mock conversations, or give me an honest first impression, I'd really appreciate it.

I do pretty well talking to friends and people I meet in everyday life, but when it comes to dating apps or starting conversations with someone I don't know, I feel like I'm missing something. I'd love some constructive feedback on what I could do better.