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Thought I'd give this a go, let me no how I done for my first time....

"he came over to her naked body slid his hand down her back and she wrapped her hands round his balls, while the other hand Massaged his dick, he gave a little moan, and rubbed his had down her clit and teased her pussy, while he teased her hard nipples.
Moaning quietly they both moved to the bed, he started to gently kiss her all over her body and slowly crept up her throbbing wet pussy and gently licked to taste her, then while he massaged her, magnificent breasts, he began licking up and down in and out and gradually licking faster until she moaned out loud in pleasure, she grabbed his hair and began scratching his back while she pushed his head deeper into her now soaking wet pussy."