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The Broken Pieces the vacuum and the droplets


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The Broken Pieces the vacuum and the droplets


It disappears into
a puff of smoke
That which gave you life
Now makes you ***
Like a priceless piece of China broke
And all you can do is hold the pieces

An emptiness that crawls in
Like an open door with a cold autumn wind
And then the vacuum expands within
A vacuum that surrounds the broken pieces

The footsteps and echoes you hear no more
The silence leaves you feeling raw
no one to hear the drips hit the floor
As tears fall from the vacuum with the broken pieces in

 

(not Kink themed as such but a reflection on the end of a dynamic )

 

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This is right where I'm at. Been fucked over, walked over...it hurts.
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Sometimes I’m glad to say my words find ways to those who feel or need them
I was worried because the wording is eclectic thanks to of you lovely people I’m not Any more
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Been there, am still there, for a long long time probably. It really does hurt I really do hurt!
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Right where I’m at, trying to find the courage to try again
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Hugs Ed you know where i am if u need an ear. Be kind to yourself and remember as one door closes another opens x

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Wow never expected so much love for this poem
Thoughts go out to the flip side of this coin “the little zebra” I know she’s hurting too
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It's a very interesting poem. Do you usually write poetry?
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1 hour ago, Kate-5999 said:
It's a very interesting poem. Do you usually write poetry?

I do Though not always regularly and they can take various forms

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